From the article: About Photography Community Critique Submission by Ravyn40
About Photography Community Critiques for Eyes
Face
- If the object was to make it look like a Painting, you suceeeded.
- —Guest Rjpfm44@gmail.com
The eyes don't quite have it
- like the overall image. I believe the highlight on the nose needs to be dampened quite a bit and the eyes brightened since they are , in my opinion, the way into this person. No real prob w/skintone as that is a creative choice too
- —Guest Leicalady
Eyes
- The eyes are tremendous and the treatment is great, but I agree with Liz that the cut off eye is annoying and the hot spot on the nose needs sorting.
- —clickergayle
Critique
- This image focuses on one of the more striking facial features, eyes. The brushstroke filter overlay helps to even out any skin flaws and focus attention further on the eyes themselves. The left eye is nicely placed at a rule of thirds intersection but the partially cropped out right side eye is distracting. The white highlight on the bridge of the nose is also a bit strong for this image.
- —LizMasoner

